I like your model. If you can get a image from the same point where April got hers i think we will get a better feel of what the form will look like from the street. I don't quite know if you had a reason to how you laid it out on the site, but i think you can look at the ocean current in that area and which way it flows. Just a thought.
This is a very strong model that stands out a lot. I do agree with the professors and think it should be oriented differently. Maybe by rotating your model on the site and taking pictures each time, you'll find a good orientation for it. Your project has a lot of potential.
I like the study model that you have made, i believe you can take this design far, but i think you are letting the property shape influence the design of your site itself, try to stray away from that shape and design the space the way you would like to see it.
You have a strong concept, but I expect a lot more. You need to work with your site. Do not just place the building arbitrarily. Look at your precedent studies, and go back to your site analysis.
I like the floating substance of the concept. You just need to keep the essence of lightness throughout the project together with wise selection of the appropriate materials
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ReplyDeleteI like your model. If you can get a image from the same point where April got hers i think we will get a better feel of what the form will look like from the street. I don't quite know if you had a reason to how you laid it out on the site, but i think you can look at the ocean current in that area and which way it flows. Just a thought.
ReplyDeleteBest of Luck.
Your're model looks nice.
ReplyDeleteThis is a very strong model that stands out a lot. I do agree with the professors and think it should be oriented differently. Maybe by rotating your model on the site and taking pictures each time, you'll find a good orientation for it. Your project has a lot of potential.
ReplyDeleteI like the study model that you have made, i believe you can take this design far, but i think you are letting the property shape influence the design of your site itself, try to stray away from that shape and design the space the way you would like to see it.
ReplyDeleteYou have a strong concept, but I expect a lot more. You need to work with your site. Do not just place the building arbitrarily. Look at your precedent studies,
ReplyDeleteand go back to your site analysis.
I like the floating substance of the concept. You just need to keep the essence of lightness throughout the project together with wise selection of the appropriate materials
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